01-11-2016, 06:05 PM
The only revision to your wording I would make would be that the immunity to death effects only effects players who are in specifically the stabilized condition, not the unconscious condition, so it does not cover any one who is affected by the sleep spell.
Furthermore, the "may resist any effect that would put them in their death count" should be changed to "have immunity to any effect that would put them in their death count". Resistances are an active defence, while immunity is not, an unconscious person cannot resist. (I'm pretty sure?)
Furthermore, the "may resist any effect that would put them in their death count" should be changed to "have immunity to any effect that would put them in their death count". Resistances are an active defence, while immunity is not, an unconscious person cannot resist. (I'm pretty sure?)